Analysis of Personal Essay

Well...I guess I'm content with my essay so far...but it's kind of hard. There's so many things I could incorporate, because there's so many more details of my 'sexual life'...but it would be too long and too difficult to 'cluster'...so I just chose to talk more about what has happened recently. I can't wait to get Prof. Chandler's comments; they would really help. I would like to know what you all think...it's hard for me to be the judge...because I know the details, I don't know how well I'm getting them across to people who don't. I definitely like this draft better than the first one, what do you all think? I'm really confused on what to write about for the memoir...any ideas? (Sadly I wasn't able to attend the last class, so I'm a little behind.)