List of activities during composition:
When writing my nature essay I tried thinking of the last time I was surrounded by nature. I love being in the woods or on the beach (not when the suns out, ironically.) I thought we had to write about something present, not based on memory so I was going to write about the nature that surrounds my house (butterflies, trees, park), but I changed my topic. After deciding on writing about my experience taking runs through the woods and relaxing on the beach back in the Spring, I started writing. I went on memory...but now, that I am revising my essay, I'm going to take another run (regardless of how cold it is outside) and write about the difference in the woods and on the beach from then and now. I'm changing my focus slightly, but I'm still going to include my feelings about the girl I love, since she was always on my mind then and is on my mind now...and how I feel about her is opposite of the nature that surrounded me then and surrounds me now...leaves are dying, but my love is growing.
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