Sorry- this is really weak:
I hope to send this to a GLBT magazine/journal. If my audience is going to consist of homo/bi-sexuals than I would prefer that my writing is something they can relate to. I’m trying to describe my sexual experiences with the opposite sex, because many lesbians can identify with those experiences. Many lesbians have started their sex lives with men and from that realized that they actually prefer women.
Also, I am setting the ‘present’ clusters of my writing at a PRIDE event. Many homosexuals attend these events and being there reminds them of their lives before they came out, and their lives presently.
I want my piece to be something that my readers can relate to and find somewhat comical. I am trying to save my actual declaration of being a lesbian for the last section of my writing, but I’m finding it hard. I want to save it for last, because my audience should know what I am talking about without having to come straight out and say it. I prefer to be somewhat obscure in my writing, and I believe it holds a certain effect/affect that I can’t really put into words.
